Kenshin and Kaoru - Sketch

Ok, it looks like Kenshin is going to kill Kaoru rather than looking lovingly into her eyes.
Poor Kaoru.

I'll be moving this to scraps later because this is not the completed piece. There is A LOT of work that needs done on this picture. This will eventually be a contest entry for

Critique for me please.

Kaze

Edit: Well, I fixed Kenshin's eyes and drew his scar and added some clothing and thier hands. Boy, their hands were a pain in the butt!!! tee hee